Dubious first impressions were soon obliterated
as your eyes began to swallow fear and shoot out hope.
I honestly thought no one could shine the way you did,
your smile could cut through tension.
I had believed you would save us all
from the great depression that was brewing,
that you could cure my world
with just one glance.
Thats all it took.
Naivete.
We searched for a leader, an idol- to show us how to achieve
you fitted our desires, played with our hopes and dreams.
You drained all you could from him, left him to die;
Paralyzed, I was torn between two worlds.
A wreckage formed by your true colours
or the paradise you promised.
What a fool I had become.
Dazzled by a brighter life
where disaster was unknown.
Blinded.
You were the king of all fools, the trainer and the guide,
But I was the fool who willingly took your side
in hope of a better life.
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wanna no the inspiration?
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This is genius. You are such an incredible writer. Who is the inspiration?? I must must know.
ReplyDeleteawesome poem. what inspired it?
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ReplyDeleteill try make it short aha.
i could rant for years!
its based from my sisters eyes.
sister fell in love.
family fell in love with sisters love.
family hit hard patch.
sisters love(SL) fixed everything.
dad plus SL go into business.
dads dreams are coming true.
sisters love turns out to be con man.
all money gone.
sister torn.
family torn.
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thankfully, we've all recovered and are more family orientated than ever! cant trust anyone but family <3